Review of an Oxford Personal Statement
📌 The speaker shares their "deeply embarrassing" personal statement written four years prior for Trinity College, University of Oxford, after gaining subscribers from an Oxford results video.
👩‍🏫 The statement focused heavily on literature, mentioning influences like Michael Morpurgo's *Private Peaceful* and detailed analysis of literary works like Coetzee's *Disgrace* and Plath's *The Bell Jar*.
🤔 The author humorously notes that their statement was primarily one long essay about books, with only one concluding paragraph detailing their A-Level subjects (History and Government/Politics).

Critique of Writing Style and Content
🔍 The statement was filled with complex vocabulary, such as describing the "ambivalence of literature" and analyzing *King Lear* versus Greek tragedy, which the speaker now finds overly "worthy" and vague.
😟 The speaker critiques their use of "big words," comparing it to a toddler masquerading in adult clothes, noting that this style likely said "precisely nothing."
📝 Key subjects analyzed included the interpretations of tragedy, empathy for tragic heroes, and themes of justice and misogyny in *Disgrace*, juxtaposed with mental vulnerability in *The Bell Jar*.

Actionable Advice for Future Applicants
❌ Do not be so vague when discussing themes; avoid stating that themes are "interesting" without explaining why.
🚫 Do not feel the need to use big words; simple, precise, and clear writing is considered good academic practice.
💪 Despite the statement being subpar, the speaker unexpectedly received an offer, suggesting that demonstrating commitment (like achieving the Silver Duke of Edinburgh Award) can still be relevant.

Key Points & Insights
➡️ Vagueness is detrimental: Explicitly explain *why* themes or concepts are compelling rather than just stating they are "interesting."
➡️ Prioritize Clarity over Complexity: Avoid unnecessarily complex vocabulary and long, rambling sentences; be simple and precise.
➡️ Self-Awareness Matters: The author realized too late that Oxford tutors care less about the applicant's personal life, dedicating only one paragraph to A-Levels and extracurriculars like the Duke of Edinburgh's Award.

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